Why you should never eat shrimp cocktail at a party (page 41)
From: Boardroom / Bottom Line Personal
RMBC Breakdown
Why this copy works — broken down by Research, Mechanism, Brief, and Copy layer.
R — Research
Research insight: Boardroom's Mel Martin was the undisputed master of fascinations. His research showed that bullets connecting a common social situation (party) with an unexpected prohibition (don't eat shrimp cocktail) generated the highest curiosity scores. The reader thinks: 'I eat shrimp cocktail at parties. What do they know that I don't?' The specificity of 'shrimp cocktail' (not 'seafood') makes it feel like a precise, researched finding.